In Short Stories In Parts - Part I of Just For A While By Eva Bell, Bangalore, India
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An excellent beginning to a story, Eva, it reads really well and moves along nicely. I look forward to part two.
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Eva;
A most interesting and romantic beginning. Waiting to see how it goes.
Prema
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Interestingly written. It has the aura of a Mills & Boon romance. Looking forward to the next part.
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sweet
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Especially love the imagery - tiny icicles reflecting the rays of the golden sun.
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Eva - Good word pictures and interesting beginning. Looking forward to knowing more about the enigmatic 'neighbour'.....
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A great beginning, Eva.
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What a rich treasure of visual imagery! I wish I had written this story. Looking forward to the next part.
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Lovely imagery and the conflict is in the right tempo when u leave the page, great Eva!
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A very beautiful story Eva. Somehow the story reminded me of Wellington, Ooty and it looks like there is more to the relationship between Emma and the dashing hero
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