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• 25 April 2010, 10:14 AM Sneha wrote:
  Gosh, so much vengeance...! You've brought it well through the images conjured.
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  1. 26 April 2010, 6:03 PM Sudha Varadarajan wrote:
     Thankyou Sneha for your comment. The quantum of violence that we read about, experience and witness at various levels of global society has succeeded in corroding our consciousness and has rendered us incapable of responding - perhaps this was my reaction to the perennial torrent of violence that has engulfed and penetrated our societies. This anger, revenge and frustration should rightfully translate into constructive responses - atleast at the personal level, it should make us more sensitive.
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     1. 27 April 2010, 9:36 AM Sneha wrote:
        Hi Sudha. Thanks for your detailed feedback. Have you read the 'Angry young Man' plays that were written by John Osborne? I felt a similar kind of anger emancipating from your poem. Indeed, life is not 'just' about all roses; infact it never is, if you ask me and your poem brings out the aspect so very well. You must surely write more.
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• 26 April 2010, 1:42 PM D.Om Prakash Narayan wrote:
  Sudha,
  Nice to see you here, Madam! But I enjoyed your other poetry, esp "Salute to a Sentinel" more than this - Please continue with nice, refreshing poetry, some of which I have read, and I am sure that will brighten up someone's day. Vengeful spirit is almost making the reader take up arms?! Maybe that was your intention, but hope 4iw readers get to see your positive poetry more!
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  1. 27 April 2010, 1:47 PM Sudha wrote:
     Thanks Om for reminding me of brighter, sunny aspects of life. Yes, it is always better to focus on positive aspects that will help us maintain sanity.
     
     Will try to cross over soon!
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• 26 April 2010, 7:04 PM lesley wrote:
  The words spill wrath and its well expressed.
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  1. 27 April 2010, 1:52 PM Sudha wrote:
     Thankyou, Leslie!
     Bitterness and anger are emotions that find better expression than happiness and compassion - be it in action or words. Shouldn't we try and break this negative trend?
     Sudha
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• 26 April 2010, 9:08 PM vimala ramu wrote:
  Short but so very powerful!
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  1. 27 April 2010, 1:55 PM Sudha wrote:
     Thanks a lot Vimala!
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• 28 April 2010, 8:03 PM shail wrote:
  That was some powerful piece of verse Sudha.
  
  Keep at it.
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  1. 29 April 2010, 3:39 PM Sudha wrote:
     Thankyou Shail, feels great to be complimented by seasoned writer!
     
     Sudha
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• 5 May 2010, 12:27 AM Irene wrote:
  Vivid anger, felt it.
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